Praxis Writing Practice Test (Improving Sentences) 2

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Firefighters and police officers risk their lives often by stepping into the way of danger physically; therefore, professionals such as doctors and lawyers have an equally significant impact on individuals’ lives medically and legally.

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In many cultures they consider fish eggs a delicacy.

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Sports are a significant part of life for people all across the world, as was demonstrated in 2006 when billions of people came together to be involved with the World Cup either through playing, watching or thru advertising.

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The argument between Paarin and me about the dent in his car continued until the early morning.

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During the summer many students go away to summer camps that teach them skills about camaraderie, perseverance and integrity.

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A consummate gentleman, Stefan’s etiquette and social grace was unmatched.

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In countries such as China the government is recognizing the advantages of a capitalist market rather than communism and adjust economic policy accordingly.

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Most of my favorite movies contain slapstick humor, however physical comedy is not the only way to make me laugh.

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Learning a new language can be difficult for people after one reaches a certain age; abilities needed to retain and apply new linguistic information deteriorate with time.

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A growing technology trend is to merge multiple devices with complimentary functions such as a phone, music player and the scheduling features of a planner.